Can someone view my resume and give me some kind of feedback?

Objective Presently seeking an administrative assistant position where I can work with a creative team of individuals, where promotional opportunities are achievable.


Experience 1998–Present U.S. Security Associates New York, NY


Supervisor ( Young %26amp; Rubicam Brands)


• Answer phones, faxes and emails.


• Assist customers / clients with incoming questions


• Monthly reports and theft reports.


• Schedule and payroll.


1996–1998 162nd Dental Office New York, NY


Receptionist


• Responsible for updating calendar and scheduling appointments.


• Filing and creating records for new patients


• Assisting patients with incoming questions.


• Follow-up calls, after patients visit.


• Answer the phones and fax.


• Verify insurance coverage / co pay.


1994–1996 Ronald Gerard Delphin, M.D. New York, NY


Receptionist


• Filing and creating records for new patients


• Answer the phones and fax.


• Verify insurance coverage.


Education 2002-2006 Bronx Community College Bronx, NY


A.A., Liberal Arts / Early Childhood Development.


2006-Present Lehman College Bronx, NY


B.A., Major: History and a Minor: Early Childhood Education


Certificates / SKILLS


• CPR/AED, First Aid and Fire guard certificate


• Lotus Notes


• Microsoft Word, Microsoft Outlook, Microsoft PowerPoint, Microsoft Excel,


• Customer service skills


• Proactive and detailed oriented


• Bilingual English / Spanish.





*furnish reference up on request.

Can someone view my resume and give me some kind of feedback?
In the objective: "where promotional opportunities are available" not are achievable - or just ", with opportunity for advancement" which is probably better





Under experience: just questions, not incoming questions - what other kind are there?





On your BA - the way you state it, is ambiguous as to whether you've completed it. Since you say "-present", I'm assuming you haven't, so I'd say something like "working toward BA..." or "completion expected xxxxxxx".





I wouldn't put SKILLS all in caps unless I put "certificates", experience, and education all in caps also - either way is OK but be consistent.





last line - no space in the middle of upon - and might say "References available...: rather than "*furnish reference..."





Other than those few minor things, looks pretty good.





Good luck.

Gold Teeth